Independence Day – Swatantrata Divas
August 15, 2006 India celebrates its 59th year as an independent country. My heart is flooding with emotions on the day. Amidst over powering thoughts, I dedicate the following piece to My Supreme Mother- My country.
Away from you my mother
In these far off lands
Not there to wipe your tears
to heal your wounds
I haven’t done enough
to make you proud
yet love from you sees not that
you just give and not ask
To be born in your womb
I am blessed
Having left your shores, I won’t complain
if I were to be damned
Blood on you, flows off tears from my eyes
Insults, attacks and jibes on you makes my fist clench
You having taught me the virtue of peace and non violence
I settle myself, nevertheless paining with your pain
On this special day of our independence my mother
accept gratitude, wishes and offerings from your
daughter who though away, feels you
and feels for you always.
60 Comments:
Very beautiful, patriotic tribute!! One should be proud of their country!!
I am lucky to have attende the ceremony here in the Indian Embassy. And for sure the feel of it is just great.
@Pat, Thank you so much. I am indeed very proud of my country, I wish that someday I will make her proud too.
Nice work,Radhika..It clearly depicts your love for our nation..and i'm proud about dat..
Happy Independence day!!!
@Barbie..after a long time. Lucky you girl!!!! Independence day at the embassy. I am missing not having done anything today. May be will go home after work and plan something
@Gangadhar, Swantarya Divasa Shubakaknshalu.....Hope I got it right in Telugu
Happy Independence Day to you and everyone in your country.
I celebrate with you all. Happy Independence Day!
Your poem conveys to me powerful feelings.
Great tribute and wonderful verse...happy birthday...thank you...
Happy Independence Day!
Take care!
DD, well written. Shows out what you feel. May the spirit of independence grow stronger. Take care
@Rhea Thank you on behalf of all of us
@Imemine, Thank you. Its a very big day for us.
@Rob, feelings are powerful I tried my best to let them come out in the poem
@Kuan Gung, Heartiest welcome to WORKSHOP. Thank you for your wishes. Hope to see you soon.
@Margie, Thank you so much
@Ari, Amen to your wish.
Good word Rads
That's a wonderful poem for our Mother! Very Proud to be Indian:)
@Dale Thanks sunshine
@Jeevan, Ofcourse we should be proud of our country
Great poetry, very emotional
a trully honest rendering to the mother country of us all, all indians, all life.
Truly a touching and lovely personal tribute to your nativity.
Happy Independence Day and may the world appreciate India in her native beauty and all she has given.
@Malcolm Thanks a ton
@GP Thanks for coming by, I am glad it came across as an honest rendering.
@Don, Thank you for your wishes.
India has indeed given so much to the world but as you rightly put I too hope people appreciate it in its 'native' beauty rather than the commercialised image of it.
heyy girl tnxx for dropping by and u look lovely!
Happy Independence Day to ya! Great poem btw. We all live so far away from our homes and what matters is that we never forget our origins. And I think u know that well.
btw if u caught me on a sad post, try the previous post :)
c u again!
Keshi.
Nice tribute to the nation....Happy Independence day :-)
Hi Keshi or should I call you Gorgeous ;)
I am glad you liked the poem. Yes we can't and shouldn't forget where we come from. Moving with times yet we should be able to retain something from our background. I did check out your previous post, left a comment too.
@Mandeep, Welcome to Workshop, Independence day wishes to you too. Hope to see you again
Peace to you!
And if the damsel is ever in distress, I'm sure indeed a prince would come to her rescue.
Have a great day!
Hello Quasar, Heartiest Welcome to you . What a beautiful name you have chosen, So Time-Traveller will visit you soon and hope to keep in touch.
Thanks for stoping by and for leaving your footmarks
Wish you a happy independence day too.. Though I do not know you well.. I can understand how you must be feeling far away from "home" .. I feel home sick in two weeks away from India.. When I go meeting clients..
Its 59 years seince we were given "political independence" ..Its time we are independent from Corruption, Poverty, Discrimination, Child Labour and crime..
I had written somewhere recently..
1.2 bn Indians can pull the country together or pull it apart..
Which way did you pull today..
Welcome to my workshop PARAG. Thanks for coming by and sharing your lovely words with us. I totally agree with you. We need to strive for complete independence now. Great statement you made. Will visit you soon.
your blog is too good . :) Pardes mei desi heart
I reiterate and hope for what Manmohan Singh said in his speech to come true:
"An India that is united in thought, not divided by religion and language,- An India that is united in our Indianness, not divided by caste and region,- An India that is united in seeking new oppportunities for growth, not divided by disparities,- An India that is caring and inclusive"
Amen...
A beautiful poem! You are a true poetess in heart!
Dumbdodi
പുതുവത്സരാശംസകള്!!
Thats Happy New Year in Malayalam, the language that we speak here in this small state in South India!! Our New Year starts tomorrow, and thought I would wish u a wonderful year ahead!!
:)
Lovely poem from the heart!
I'm here from seeing your comments on blogs I visit regularly.
Hope you come by. I'm an artist and a poet.
I'll be back. :)
36 comments,What more can I add...except WOOOOOWWWW, 17 times to make it a haiku
awww ur being too kind to me girl..I aint GORGEOUS lol! Im just ok :):)
Anyways tnxxx!
Keshi.
@Mrinalini, Thank you for your visit and welcome. I am glad you liked my blog :-). Well I don't know how desi I am, but after more than a year abroad I for sure am feeling pardesi :(. Anyways hope to see you around.
@Gaurav, Wonderful part of the speech. Thanks yaar.
I am sharing Nehruji's opening lines on eve of our first independence day
"Long years ago we made a tryst with destiny, and now the time comes when we shall redeem our pledge, not wholly or in full measure, but very substantially. At the stroke of the midnight hour, when the world sleeps, India will awake to life and freedom. A moment comes, which comes but rarely in history, when we step out from the old to the new, when an age ends, and when the soul of a nation, long suppressed, finds utterance. It is fitting that at this solemn moment we take the pledge of dedication to the service of India and her people and to the still larger cause of humanity."
Hope you will enjoy reading.
@Helen, Thank you for stopping and making your presence felt. Its really heart warming. Hope to see you around
Poetess or not I am not sure but I endeavour to be true at heart!!
@Velu, Happy Vishu!!!! I know about this day. I have loads of mallu friends. Its not difficult to come across you guys as whereever moon and sun can reach, you will find a mallu!!! So where is my vishu then..aren't elders supposed to give the younger lot loads of cash on the day :-D
@Silvermoon GEL, Shadows in the moon light is indeed a beautiful name. I have seen you around as wel actually I visited your blog just yesterday, I have seen your lovely paintings as well. Now that we have been introduced will come around regularly.
Thank you and WELCOME
@Plus Ultra...Everyone is just being kind to me :-) Can't complain though.
I would love to write a haiku sometime..once I am kinda satisfied with my normal poetry. Actually other day I was going through your archives and I found an English Ghazal from you. I fell in love with it immediately. So much to see and learn through blogs. Thank you
@Keshi...Comeon wherever you have posted your pictures you do not have around 150 comments. That speaks for itself ;-). You write very well too.
hi dodi,,
i was reading your comments in keshi page. as i was not blogging properly meeting up friends was checkign my known blogger friends. I noticed you in keshi page. was keeping in mind to visit once i finish meeting my other known people here in blog. and you had dropped in.. thnak you dodi.. you made it easy... nice to drop for first time. I may not post regullary.. but suddenly every day i will post a scribbling that makes no sense yet i do.
your poem on independence day was slovely and it gave me the nostaliga what i felt on 15th., never i bothered it while in india first independence out of country made me feel the indian sprit.
by the way - i was cirulating the content that ghandi didnt celebrate or join the independence through mail. it was published in deccan chronicle
as well was spreadign one article on why india cant match with or win over china . that article is published by saby in his blog. hope you find the saby often in keshi page. they are great pals - eheiheiehhe will read you page now once i am through with another friends page whom i didnt been there for a month
@Known stranger, welcome. I am finding it hard to keep up with blogs as well. Also I haven't even listed the blogs I read here, so I go to all blogs by my memory, so I keep forgetting one or the other.
Don't worry visit whenever you can and whenever you want.
I will check out the links you mentioned, I am glad you felt the indian spirit even in foreign land.
you have been tagged:)
Lovely Dodi...thank you for visiting me~
It got me nostalgic...its been so long since I spent time In india...almost a yr!
@Jeevan Thank you
@Mayden's Voyage, nice of you to stop by. Will see you soon
@Ekta, Heartiest welcome, very nice of you to come by.
It will be a year in Nov that I last went to India, planning to go again in dec. But I miss home and family already
dumbdodi,
Happy Independence Day.
We in Malaysia will celebrate Independence Day on this coming 31st August.
Lovely poem!
execellant,congrats for half century, best wishes & best of luck for century.
@Vinesh Heartiest welcome to you. Orange juice for soul..very interesting. Will come for a sip soon :-)
@Mummy, thank you amma. Though it feels nice I don't want to get into the number trap. I will just write, comments will come if they have to. Love you
Namaste!
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